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Brestmoor Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

Bachelor Thesis subject

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I would like to know if this subject I came up with is correct and if it sounds good
"Visiting Greece as a way to experience the phenomenon of the birthplace of western culture"
  

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"Visiting Greece as a way to experience the phenomenon of the birthplace of western culture" (A birthplace is not a phenomenon. ) Perhaps this: "Visit Greece to see the archaeological remnants of the birth of western culture" But that sounds more like a travel agent's brochure than an academic thesis.

  • "Visiting Greece as a way to experience the phenomenon of the birthplace of western culture" (A birthplace is not a phenomenon.
  • ) Perhaps this: "Visit Greece to see the archaeological remnants of the birth of western culture" But that sounds more like a travel agent's brochure than an academic thesis.
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"Visiting Greece as a way to experience the phenomenon of the birthplace of western culture" (A birthplace is not a phenomenon. Lightning, tsunamis, earthquakes and volcanic eruptions are natural phenomena.)

Perhaps this:
"Visit Greece to see the archaeological remnants of the birth of western culture"

But that sounds more like a travel agent's brochure than

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