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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Awkward sentence,how to make this sentence more coherent?
Qn:He saw a handphone that he likes so much and (he) wanted to steal it.
Can the (he) be omitted?
How else can I make the sentence more coherent?It seems rather awkward to me. Thank you.
Can the (he) be omitted?
How else can I make the sentence more coherent?It seems rather awkward to me. Thank you.
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'So' will always make it too casual to write. Is 'handphone' used in your part of the world? I have never heard it.
- 'So' will always make it too casual to write.
- Is 'handphone' used in your part of the world?
- I have never heard it.
- Anyway, there is nothing wrong with it like this: He saw a cellphone that he liked, and he wanted to steal it.
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'So' will always make it too casual to write. Is 'handphone' used in your part of the world? I have never heard it. Anyway, there is nothing wrong with it like this:
He saw a cellphone that he liked, and he wanted to steal it.
He saw a cellphone that he liked, and he wanted to steal it.
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