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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Awkward sentence... help needed

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00To consider the web map interface for efficiency of use, Fitts’ law is a basic guideline to design an interface to deal with time and distance factors.02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00I need help in revising the following sentence: 02br 02br 00To consider the web map interface for efficiency of use, Fitts’ law is a basic guideline to design an interface to deal with time and distance factors. 02font 02br 02br 00Yes, awkward and hard to understand. I acn't help with the meaning, but in terms of structure, perhaps this.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00I need help in revising the following sentence: 02br 02br 00To consider the web map interface for efficiency of use, Fitts’ law is a basic guideline to design an interface to deal with time and distance factors.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Yes, awkward and hard to understand.
  • I acn't help with the meaning, but in terms of structure, perhaps this.
  • 02br 02br 00 Fitts’s law is a basic guideline for designing an interface to deal with time and distance factors.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive 0-
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0Hi,02br
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00To consider the web map interface for efficiency of use, Fitts’ law is a basic guideline to design an interface to deal with time and distance factors. 02br
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00I'm not sure if it's the logic or the sentence structure that's ma
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