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Jewstin Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Awkward sentence - Do I need a comma/how can I fix this sentence?

As explained by Macdonald, Bennett, a school bus driver, argues that...

Macdonald and Bennett are two seperate people. Bennett is the school bus driver.

So I am summarizing what Macdonald reported about what Bennett argued.
  

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Your sentence is fine as it is. Rover

  • Your sentence is fine as it is.
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Your sentence is fine as it is.

Rover

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