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Jewstin Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Awkward sentence - Do I need a comma/how can I fix this sentence?
As explained by Macdonald, Bennett, a school bus driver, argues that...
Macdonald and Bennett are two seperate people. Bennett is the school bus driver.
Macdonald and Bennett are two seperate people. Bennett is the school bus driver.
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Hi, As explained by Macdonald and Bennet, a school bus driver, argues that... Regards
- Hi, As explained by Macdonald and Bennet, a school bus driver, argues that...
- Regards
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Hi,
As explained by Macdonald and Bennet, a school bus driver, argues that...
Regards
As explained by Macdonald and Bennet, a school bus driver, argues that...
Regards
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Hi,
It's not incorrect, although you could reword it if you wish.
eg Macdonald explained that Bennett, a school bus driver, argues that...
Clive
PS - You could also say
It's not incorrect, although you could reword it if you wish.
eg Macdonald explained that Bennett, a school bus driver, argues that...
Clive
PS - You could also say
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Hi Regards,
As explained by Macdonald and Bennet, a school bus driver, argues that...
This does not seem at all grammatical to me. Who do you intend to be the subject of 'argues'?
Clive
As explained by Macdonald and Bennet, a school bus driver, argues that...
This does not seem at all grammatical to me. Who do you intend to be the subject of 'argues'?
Clive
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