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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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While eco-tax may be able to change the direction of the capitalist zeitgeist, the conservatives’ manifesto pledges to secure the UK’s energy supplies by nuclear proliferation; whereas the Liberal Democrats’ manifesto favours wind farms in rejection of it.
I don't like the 'of it' at the end.
I don't like the 'of it' at the end.
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While eco-tax may be able to change the direction of the capitalist zeitgeist, the conservatives’ manifesto pledges to secure the UK’s energy supplies by nuclear proliferation; whereas the Liberal Democrats’ manifesto, (in) rejecting the nuclear option, (optional) favours wind farms.
- While eco-tax may be able to change the direction of the capitalist zeitgeist, the conservatives’ manifesto pledges to secure the UK’s energy supplies by nuclear proliferation; whereas the Liberal Democrats’ manifesto, (in) rejecting the nuclear option, (optional) favours wind farms.
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While eco-tax may be able to change the direction of the capitalist zeitgeist, the conservatives’ manifesto pledges to secure the UK’s energy supplies by nuclear proliferation; whereas the Liberal Democrats’ manifesto, (in) rejecting the nuclear option, (optional) favours wind farms.
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