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Little_star Posted 21 years ago
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Awkward sentence
Which one of the following is better?
The sentence is :
#The new corrosion feature is initiated with a size of 10% pipe wall thickness in depth and 50 mm in axial length.# Or
#The new corrosion feature is initiated with a depth of 10% pipe wall thickness and an axial length of 50 mm .#
The sentence is :
#The new corrosion feature is initiated with a size of 10% pipe wall thickness in depth and 50 mm in axial length.# Or
#The new corrosion feature is initiated with a depth of 10% pipe wall thickness and an axial length of 50 mm .#
Top answer
The meaning is not clear. 50 mm can be the length of the pipe. What is10% pipe?
- The meaning is not clear.
- 50 mm can be the length of the pipe.
- What is10% pipe?
- What does 'depth' refer to?
- Is the 'wall thickness' that of the pipe?
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The meaning is not clear. 50 mm can be the length of the pipe. What is10% pipe? What does 'depth' refer to? Is the 'wall thickness' that of the pipe?
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