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Mr. Miller Posted 16 years ago
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These sentences do not sound easy to me.
Are they correctly written, and can I improve thier structure.
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The Dremel is one of the most versatile handheld power tools used by both professionals and novices alike. Used with the plunge router attachment, the Dremel transforms into surface router that can handle most job’s size, speed, and detail. Mounting door hinges with the Dremel makes for fast, precise work.
  

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Used by professionals and novices alike, the Dremel is one of the most versatile handheld power tools available. With the plunge router attachment, the Dremel transforms into a surface router that can handle the size, speed, and detail of any job. Mounting door hinges with the Dremel makes for fast, precise work.

  • Used by professionals and novices alike, the Dremel is one of the most versatile handheld power tools available.
  • With the plunge router attachment, the Dremel transforms into a surface router that can handle the size, speed, and detail of any job.
  • Mounting door hinges with the Dremel makes for fast, precise work.
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Used by professionals and novices alike, the Dremel is one of the most versatile handheld power tools available. With the plunge router attachment, the Dremel transforms into a surface router that can handle the size, speed, and detail of any job. Mounting door hinges with the Dremel makes for fast, precise work.
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OK, we're talking about a tool and its uses, right? But really we're talking about the users of the tool and how much better off they would be to use the Dremel. So, let's go at it from their point of view:

"Both professionals and novices will feel comfortable using the Dremel because of its versitility. The Dremel easily transforms into a surface router with the addition of the plunge ro

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