No because 'go away on' and 'away from home' are repeating the same information.
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StevenukdDear Teachers,This might be better: " has to go away from home on business". No need for repetition of 'away'.
1. That man usually has to go away on business away from home.
- Is this natural to say?
Thanks very much to Teachers,
Stevenukd.