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Antonija Posted 17 years ago
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This expression seems funny in this sentence. How can I avoid repeating we would like?
Can you, please, help me improve these two sentence? Thank you in advance.
By further development of the retail network we would like to bring our company (products) closer to the households away from the shopping malls. In this way we would like to make our products and prices more accessible to them.
This expression seems funny in this sentence. How can I avoid repeating we would like?
Can you, please, help me improve these two sentence? Thank you in advance.
By further development of the retail network we would like to bring our company (products) closer to the households away from the shopping malls. In this way we would like to make our products and prices more accessible to them.
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I'd change the second "would like" to "will." Alternately, you could make "our products & prices" the subject: "In this way, our products and prices will be more accessible to them."
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