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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Awards
I would be grateful if you could tell me if this is grammatically correct:
Honoured at the Facilities Management Awards 2014, we won the Health & Safety Award from the European Safety Council, recognising its commitment for protecting employees from the risk of injury and ill health at work, and to keep its workers and workplaces healthy and safe during the year.
Honoured at the Facilities Management Awards 2014, we won the Health & Safety Award from the European Safety Council, recognising its commitment for protecting employees from the risk of injury and ill health at work, and to keep its workers and workplaces healthy and safe during the year.
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It needs some restructuring: At the Facilities Management Awards 2014, the European Safety Council honoured us with the Health & Safety Award, recognising our commitment to protect employees from the risk of injury and ill health at work, and to keep our workers and workplace healthy and safe.
- It needs some restructuring: At the Facilities Management Awards 2014, the European Safety Council honoured us with the Health & Safety Award, recognising our commitment to protect employees from the risk of injury and ill health at work, and to keep our workers and workplace healthy and safe.
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It needs some restructuring:
At the Facilities Management Awards 2014, the European Safety Council honoured us with the Health & Safety Award, recognising our commitment to protect employees from the risk of injury and ill health at work, and to keep our workers and workplace healthy and safe.
At the Facilities Management Awards 2014, the European Safety Council honoured us with the Health & Safety Award, recognising our commitment to protect employees from the risk of injury and ill health at work, and to keep our workers and workplace healthy and safe.
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