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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Avuncular
Hello!
Worul you please help me rewrite the following sentence? I feel like the part that starts with ''who listens to his employees' '' in my sentence is too week, and thus can be improved by replacing it with more appropriate words. Could you please help me?
'' I am truly so fortunate to have ever such an avuncular, friendly and fatherly rector who listens to his employees' thoughts and cares what they think. ''
Worul you please help me rewrite the following sentence? I feel like the part that starts with ''who listens to his employees' '' in my sentence is too week, and thus can be improved by replacing it with more appropriate words. Could you please help me?
'' I am truly so fortunate to have ever such an avuncular, friendly and fatherly rector who listens to his employees' thoughts and cares what they think. ''
Top answer
Maybe I should use genial instead of avuncular . What do you think?
- Maybe I should use genial instead of avuncular .
- What do you think?
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Maybe I should use genial instead of avuncular. What do you think?
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BAYRAM ERDEM I feel like the part that starts with ''who listens to his employees' '' in my sentence is too week, ( 7 days)' I am truly
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Dear Alphecca Stars,
of course, I am not.
It's mostly because of my bad wording.
The rector hired me. So how can I say that I am very happy because the rector at my school is kind and helpful in a better way?
of course, I am not.
It's mostly because of my bad wording.
The rector hired me. So how can I say that I am very happy because the rector at my school is kind and helpful in a better way?
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BAYRAM ERDEMMaybe I should use genial instead of avuncular. What do you think?It is certainly a more common word, and fits the sentence.
Avuncular and fatherly are so close in meaning that it seems redundant.
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I am truly fortunate to work for such a genial, friendly and fatherly rector who listens to what his employees say and cares about what they think.
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Thank you for your correction. So I guess the main problem with my sentence is about the wrong verb choice. Now it sounds just like a sentence I've wanted to write.
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