Avoiding Repetition
Hi,
Is there any way to avoid repeating "TAC level" in the sentence below?
"There was a significant difference in TAC level between the group exposed to 300 lux and the group exposed to 5000 and 8000 lux; while there was no significant difference in TAC level between the group exposed to 5000 and 8000 lux after 14 days of exposure.
Any other correction needed?
Thanks!
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gillyflower after 14 days of exposure Does this bit apply to both parts of your sentence?
- gillyflower after 14 days of exposure Does this bit apply to both parts of your sentence?
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gillyflowerafter 14 days of exposure
Does this bit apply to both parts of your sentence?
0Your writing is exceedingly confusing. Define your groups to make it clear. For example:
Group A was exposed to 300 lux for 14 days.
Group B was exposed to 5000 lux for 7 days, then 8000 lux for 7 days.
Group C was exposed to ???
Then you have no repetition:
"There was a significant difference in TAC level between Group A and Group B, but none between Group B a
0gillyflowerwhile there was no significant difference in TAC level between the group exposed to 5000 and 8000 lux
This part is confusing. It only mentions one group.
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