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Blue banana 333 Posted 4 years ago
Grammar
Avoiding Comma Splices and bad Grammar
I am writing a fantasy novel, and I am trying to avoid using the word "and" as much as I do.
So, I would normally write a sentence like this:
John stalked the deer and he tracked it through the woods.
But would prefer to change some of my sentences to this:
John stalked the deer, tracking it through the woods.
Is this a comma splice? or bad grammar?
Thanks!
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blue banana 333 Is this a comma splice? No. blue banana 333 or bad grammar?
- blue banana 333 Is this a comma splice?
- No.
- blue banana 333 or bad grammar?
- No.
- It's a very good sentence.
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blue banana 333Is this a comma splice?
No.
blue banana 333 or bad grammar?
No. It's a very good sentence.
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