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Blue red 958 Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Avoid repetition

Hi there,

This is what's supposed to be a motivational text. The problem is that the words "successful/unsuccessful" are repeated several times, and I don't know how to deal with it?

"Do you know the difference between successful and unsuccessful entrepreneurs?

Successful entrepreneurs continuously learn, unsuccessful ones fly by the seat of their pants.

Successful entrepreneurs accept responsibility for their failures, unsuccessful ones blame others.

Successful entrepreneurs take the chance and embrace change, unsuccessful ones procrastinate!

Which entrepreneurs do you want to be ?"

Can you please help ?

Thank you,

  

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"Do you know the difference between successful and unsuccessful entrepreneurs? The ones who succeed continuously learn; they don't fly by the seat of their pants. ) They accept responsibility for their failures; they never blame others.

  • "Do you know the difference between successful and unsuccessful entrepreneurs?
  • The ones who succeed continuously learn; they don't fly by the seat of their pants.
  • ) They accept responsibility for their failures; they never blame others.
  • And they take chances and embrace change; they never procrastinate!
  • ) Which kind of entrepreneur do you want to be ?
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"Do you know the difference between successful and unsuccessful entrepreneurs?

The ones who succeed continuously learn; they don't fly by the seat of their pants. (Actually these actions are NOT comparable.)

They accept responsibility for their failures; they never blame others.

And they take chances and embrace change; they never

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