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If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments?

This personal statement is mediocre. Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive. There are too many cliche in this essay.
  

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Hi, If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments? This personal statement is mediocre. Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive.

— Clive

  • Hi, If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments?
  • This personal statement is mediocre.
  • Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive.
  • There are too many cliche s.
  • in this essay Clive
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Hi,

If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments?

This personal statement is mediocre. Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive. There are too many cliches. in this essay



Clive
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