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Soufiane Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Autobiographical Essay
Hello,
I am a prospective student and I want to apply to an American University. They ask for an Autobiographical Essay. I wrote with difficulty it but I fell that something is missing or some sentences need to be reformulated. So, I am here asking for help 'cause I want to make my essay almost perfect!....
I know it's a little bit long, but, if you want, just give some indications or advices to let me know where I am and how I did it.
here is the link:
http://webcenter1.free.fr/aut.doc
thank you for you help!
Soufiane
I am a prospective student and I want to apply to an American University. They ask for an Autobiographical Essay. I wrote with difficulty it but I fell that something is missing or some sentences need to be reformulated. So, I am here asking for help 'cause I want to make my essay almost perfect!....
I know it's a little bit long, but, if you want, just give some indications or advices to let me know where I am and how I did it.
here is the link:
http://webcenter1.free.fr/aut.doc
thank you for you help!
Soufiane
Top answer
Hi Soufiane, Welcome to English Forum. I don't have time to help you this evening. But I can certainly begin to give you a helping hand tomorrow.
- Hi Soufiane, Welcome to English Forum.
- I don't have time to help you this evening.
- But I can certainly begin to give you a helping hand tomorrow.
- In preparation for reviewing and modifying your essay, I urge you to look at some sample essays.
- Try googling, "university entrance autobiographical essay sample" without the quotes.
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Hi Soufiane,
Welcome to English Forum.
I don't have time to help you this evening. But I can certainly begin to give you a helping hand tomorrow.
In preparation for reviewing and modifying your essay, I urge you to look at some sample essays. Try googling, "university entrance autobiographical essay sample" without the quotes. Please let me know if you find an ess
Welcome to English Forum.
I don't have time to help you this evening. But I can certainly begin to give you a helping hand tomorrow.
In preparation for reviewing and modifying your essay, I urge you to look at some sample essays. Try googling, "university entrance autobiographical essay sample" without the quotes. Please let me know if you find an ess
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Ok thank you very much.
I am going to start seriously the edition of my essay tomorrow it's (23h48!)
You are a really great person, I don't realize that people like you are present in the internet. I looked up the helps you've gived to others, and it that was just fantastic !
Sincerely,
I am going to start seriously the edition of my essay tomorrow it's (23h48!)
You are a really great person, I don't realize that people like you are present in the internet. I looked up the helps you've gived to others, and it that was just fantastic !
Sincerely,
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Soufiane,
I like your positive attitude. I look forward to working with you and completing your essay.
It's really important that you look at a few autobiographical essays before we begin in earnest.
MountainHiker
I like your positive attitude. I look forward to working with you and completing your essay.
It's really important that you look at a few autobiographical essays before we begin in earnest.
MountainHiker
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Good morning,
Well, I spent time searching in the internet some autobiographical essays samples, but I didn't found very much essays, all of them are in a different topic...
However, I liked some of them which contains some well-written paragraphs that could fit with my essay...
Here's the link of an edited one:
Well, I spent time searching in the internet some autobiographical essays samples, but I didn't found very much essays, all of them are in a different topic...
However, I liked some of them which contains some well-written paragraphs that could fit with my essay...
Here's the link of an edited one:
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Soufiane,
That is a good start.
Before we start on your essay, I want to ask you some background questions. We are going to use the information from the background questions to improve your essay. Please answer the following questions. Feel free to answer briefly or use a paragraph to answer. The questions are listed in no specific order. Also, when answering these questio
That is a good start.
Before we start on your essay, I want to ask you some background questions. We are going to use the information from the background questions to improve your essay. Please answer the following questions. Feel free to answer briefly or use a paragraph to answer. The questions are listed in no specific order. Also, when answering these questio
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Hi,
1) computer & information technologies , politics (reading newspaper, forums participation)
2) All what's missing on my knowledge! Computer is a tool that fascinates me, I want to learn more about what are the other capacities of computer and what are the manner and logisitics other fields use computer.
3) In moroccan school don't care much about that. But I'll be fair, A
1) computer & information technologies , politics (reading newspaper, forums participation)
2) All what's missing on my knowledge! Computer is a tool that fascinates me, I want to learn more about what are the other capacities of computer and what are the manner and logisitics other fields use computer.
3) In moroccan school don't care much about that. But I'll be fair, A
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Hi Soufiane,
Thank you for your answers.
With regard to your essay, we will examine it shortly. However, even though I like your essay, we are going to have pretty much start all over.
What the universities are asking for is how have you organized your life to take advantage of the opportunities? And how have you taken advantage of these opportunities to further yo
Thank you for your answers.
With regard to your essay, we will examine it shortly. However, even though I like your essay, we are going to have pretty much start all over.
What the universities are asking for is how have you organized your life to take advantage of the opportunities? And how have you taken advantage of these opportunities to further yo
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Hi,
Please show me the link where it says you require an essay at Binghamtom University. I would like to read up their requirements.
MountainHiker
Please show me the link where it says you require an essay at Binghamtom University. I would like to read up their requirements.
MountainHiker
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reHI,
1) If there's a great job opportunity, why not?
2) With an american diploma and a acceptable background, it's possible
3) I've taken a TOEFL test on jan 2004, but I scored only 533, all univeristies that I want to apply to are requiring a score up to 550. I registered for another test to raise my score, I will take it on 16 oct 2004. I registered for the SAT for the 6 N
1) If there's a great job opportunity, why not?
2) With an american diploma and a acceptable background, it's possible
3) I've taken a TOEFL test on jan 2004, but I scored only 533, all univeristies that I want to apply to are requiring a score up to 550. I registered for another test to raise my score, I will take it on 16 oct 2004. I registered for the SAT for the 6 N
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Soufiane,
Regard to 1) why not?
There is no reason why not per se. But sometimes people a have a "noble" mission. They want to return to become a leader in their own community. They want start their computer company in Morocco to help serve local businesses. That has some appeal.
If you are a university, sometimes like to help or advance those who will have a s
Regard to 1) why not?
There is no reason why not per se. But sometimes people a have a "noble" mission. They want to return to become a leader in their own community. They want start their computer company in Morocco to help serve local businesses. That has some appeal.
If you are a university, sometimes like to help or advance those who will have a s
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