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Screenwriting

Audio-only drama: movies without pictures?

Paul,
[nq:1]Bert -- I see from the website that you've adaptated books for plays for the radio market. Did you follow a certain format for that...?[/nq]
There is an approximate BBC house style for script layout, but these days it is only approximate: in times gone by, when the Beeb's audio drama departments were much bigger and better funded than they are now, all scripts were retyped by staff secretaries before they went into production; now, a writer's own final draft manuscript (or computer file) is often simply photocopied and used, with no standardised layout being insisted on. As long as the basic elements of the script are present and clearly differentiated it seems that it will be acceptable, though I've heard moans from technical crews that they're sometimes given scripts to work from which are barely up to their particular specialised needs.

The BBC website has examples of recommended layouts, I think.
[nq:1]Different kind of "visuals" for this type of format isn't it?[/nq]
Well yes, in the sense that it's a bit daft to include stuff that a listener can't appreciate from sound alone. But it's perfectly reasonable to write, for example, "A powerful sports car comes tearing round the corner, skids, rides up on the kerb and crashes through a plate glass window". Or, on a less melodramatic level, to punctuate speech with a direction like, "She looks up and locks eyes with her husband", since even though that one obviously can't actually be heard, the action affects the dialogue either side of the moment. I often specify bodily movement, too, because it affects the voice.
[nq:1]Are you tempted to use a lot of exposition as found in most books or do you try to write it like a movie medium story - "show don't tell?"[/nq]
Novel-type exposition is usually pretty deadly on radio, I think. Do you know the "Gun in my right hand" phrase? It's used to indicate that clunky, tell-the-audience-what-they-can't-see sort of writing: the full line is, "Don't move! This gun which I'm holding in my right hand is loaded!"

I suppose "show, don't tell" applies to the stuff I write, but actually, "don't even show, because most visual information doesn't matter a hoot to the audience" is nearer what I aim for. Unless it's absolutely vital to the plot, I almost never try to get across what characters or settings look like, for example. Why bother? Let each listener create her own image. Isn't that what radio's all about? The power of the audience's imagination?

What's your involvement with the genre, Paul?

Bert http://www.bertcoules.co.uk
  

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[nq:1]I suppose "show, don't tell" applies to the stuff I write, but actually, "don't even show, because most visual information ... Isn't that what radio's all about? The power of the audience's imagination?

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  • The power of the audience's imagination?
  • What's your involvement with the genre, Paul?
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[nq:1]I suppose "show, don't tell" applies to the stuff I write, but actually, "don't even show, because most visual information ... Isn't that what radio's all about? The power of the audience's imagination? What's your involvement with the genre, Paul? Bert[/nq]
I wish I could say "lots!" but the only thing I can boast about is spending a year on a local FM station with my own music show (I
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Paul,

Interesting background, thanks.
[nq:1]Is it a big market in the UK (or the USA for that matter) especially with internet radio now growing?[/nq]
BBC radio is still the biggest employer of writers in the country, and radio drama soaks up new material: there's at least one play or series episode every day on the Beeb's main spoken-word network, and often more. These are all s
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Bert said:
[nq:1]BBC radio is still the biggest employer of writers in the country, and radio drama soaks up new material: there's ... of what they call old-time radio shows, which are a very different cup of tea to the Beeb's studio product.[/nq]
Thanks, Bert.

Sorry, you've opened wide poor old Pandor'a box

How did you get involved in this medium?

Did you opti
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Paul,
[nq:1]How did you get involved in this medium?[/nq]
I was a recording engineer at the Beeb working on general programmes, moved to drama, worked on loads of shows, sometimes found myself thinking "I could write something better than this", tried it and found that apparently I could. I did a spell as a producer/director, then left to go freelance.
[nq:1]Did you option the books r
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[nq:1]No, I urge everyone not to try it - I really don't need the competition.[/nq]
[nq:2]Thanks for any tips, Bert.[/nq]
[nq:1]You're welcome. The bill will be in the post. Bert[/nq]
Hey Bert -- what about a Reality Radio show? Do you think it would catch on and get all that nasty drama off of the airwaves?

Paul :-)Nz
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[nq:1]Novel-type exposition is usually pretty deadly on radio, I think. Do you know the "Gun in my right hand" phrase? ... sort of writing: the full line is, "Don't move! This gun which I'm holding in my right hand is loaded!"[/nq]
ONE ARMED MAN Don't move! This gun which I'm holding in my right hand is loaded! Um, I mean this gun I'm holding in left hand... I can never keep it straight. Tech
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[nq:2]Novel-type exposition is usually pretty deadly on radio, I think. ... gun which I'm holding in my right hand is loaded!"[/nq]
ONE ARMED MAN Don't move! This gun which I'm holding in my right hand is loaded! Um, I mean this gun I'm holding in left hand... I can never keep it straight. Technically I should say Don't move! This gun which I'm holding in my only hand is loaded!

VICT
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[nq:1]ONE ARMED MAN Don't move! This gun which I'm holding in my right hand is loaded! Um, I mean this ... sort of hand I would have recommended to hold a hand gun in, if you don't mind me saying so..[/nq]
ONE ARMED MAN No, of course not, **** decent of you to mention it. In fact I'd like to shake your hand -- one of 'em. Um, do you think you could hold my gun?
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[nq:2] ONE ARMED MAN Don't move! This gun which I'm ... hand gun in, if you don't mind me saying so..[/nq]
[nq:1]ONE ARMED MAN No, of course not, **** decent of you to mention it. In fact I'd like to shake your hand -- one of 'em. Um, do you think you could hold my gun?[/nq]
VICTIM So much better than holding any of the bullets, if you get my meaning, old boy... say, how did you load it?
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[nq:2] ONE ARMED MAN No, of course not, **** decent ... 'em. Um, do you think you could hold my gun?[/nq]
[nq:1]VICTIM So much better than holding any of the bullets, if you get my meaning, old boy... say, how did you load it? ONE ARMED MAN Bullets? Load?[/nq]

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