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Mr. Tom Posted 9 years ago
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Attending the event is completely optional ...

Hi

Is this sentence OK in formal writing?

(Principal's letter to parents about an upcoming event)

Attending the event is completely optional and is left to the discretion of the parents.

and

Attending the event by the students is completely optional and is left to the discretion of the parents.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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Mr. Tom Attending the event by the students is completely optional for the students and is left to the discretion of the parents.

  • Mr.
  • Tom Attending the event by the students is completely optional for the students and is left to the discretion of the parents.
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Mr. TomAttending the event by the students is completely optional for the students and is left to the discretion of the parents.

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