Could you have a look at the following sentences and say whether they are correct or not?
A formal letter:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with your advertisement for the Proficiency Photography course in England that I found in the Daily Telegraph from 23rd March 2012. I would like to ask about the program of this course and an/the opportunity to receive a certificate for its completion.Can you send it to me? I am interested in the size of groups and some required experience. I prefer learning in small groups because then I believe I will make some progress. I would like to know more details about the number of hours of classes during a/the which should I use here? day and the total duration of the course. How often do the lessons take place? How long does the course last? I am still not sure about two things: What is the price of this course? Where do the lessons take place? I look forward to your answer. Yours faithfully, Yesterday 1:49 pm
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