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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Assistance with message plz

Please tell me what you think about the below message.
Please edit and enhance my message to my teacher:

Hi Dr. Miller,

I am back in town. I would like to meet with you to discuss a few things. Please let me know when you would be available in your office.
  

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Dear Dr Miller, I would like to meet with you for about [amount of time] to discuss [A, B and C]. Please let me know when it would be convenient for you.

— Mister Micawber

  • Dear Dr Miller, I would like to meet with you for about [amount of time] to discuss [A, B and C].
  • Please let me know when it would be convenient for you.
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Dear Dr Miller,

I would like to meet with you for about [amount of time] to discuss [A, B and C]. Please let me know when it would be convenient for you.
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Thank you. Do I stop after '... convenient for you'?

Also, I am just wondering was this sentence correct:

let me know when 'you would' be available in your office. Is you would correct, or should it have been 'would you'?

Thanks.
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Anonymous. Do I stop after '... convenient for you'?
Yes.
Anonymous Is you would correct
Yes.
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Thank you very much.

However, should I put a question mark or full stop after your last sentence.. convenient for you. I think a full stop, but please confirm.
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I have edited it—full stop.
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