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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Assistance in Grammer for a statement
My question although it may seem trivial is realy important to me, i hope someone can help.
I am writing a statement for university currently. However, there is one sentence that i am really disturbed by. It goes as follows
"I will be commencing Psychology in the 2nd semester, which i feel will be of great benefit to me in my future studies"
Can anyone think of a better way to phrase this? I am having real problems, as i cannot be more specific as i have not begun the unit yet and i cannot know the details. However, its been put to me that i should include it in my statement..
I thankyou all for your assistance.
I am writing a statement for university currently. However, there is one sentence that i am really disturbed by. It goes as follows
"I will be commencing Psychology in the 2nd semester, which i feel will be of great benefit to me in my future studies"
Can anyone think of a better way to phrase this? I am having real problems, as i cannot be more specific as i have not begun the unit yet and i cannot know the details. However, its been put to me that i should include it in my statement..
I thankyou all for your assistance.
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Hi, "I will be commencing Psychology in the 2nd semester, which i feel will be of great benefit to me in my future studies" I don't see anything really odd about this. It's OK. You could omit 'to me'.
- Hi, "I will be commencing Psychology in the 2nd semester, which i feel will be of great benefit to me in my future studies" I don't see anything really odd about this.
- It's OK.
- You could omit 'to me'.
- However, the professor who reads it will note that you do not seem to understand that English requires the use of a capital 'I'.
- And a period at the end.
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Hi,
"I will be commencing Psychology in the 2nd semester, which i feel will be of great benefit to me in my future studies"
I don't see anything really odd about this. It's OK. You could omit 'to me'.
However, the professor who reads it will note that you do not seem to understand that Englis
"I will be commencing Psychology in the 2nd semester, which i feel will be of great benefit to me in my future studies"
I don't see anything really odd about this. It's OK. You could omit 'to me'.
However, the professor who reads it will note that you do not seem to understand that Englis
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