Assignment II email writing (school)

Assignment II – Email writing

For school I have to write an email. So can anyone correct my email Please?

You are head of human resources at kotoshina company. Kotoshina is an all organic skin care line originating from Kyoto. All products include green tea elements. You have been touch with an IT training company about training for some of your staff. You have received information about the training you intend to order but need to change some of the details. Write an email to the head of the training department, think of what kind of changes you might need to make.

FROM: Email Removed
TO: Email Removed
CC:
Subject: information about the training

Dear Sir/Madam,

Recently I have had contact with IT training company. This is about the upcoming training you have signed up for. I have received a lot of information and want to inform you.

The following financing offer:

* It is intended that everyone takes their laptop

* Participants must take an online test before the training. This test is still sent by e-mail today.

* If the online test is not achieved, you cannot attend the training.

However, three Composition are also mentioned:

* The IT training company will provide a catering. So there is no food to be taken with.

* The location is not on the 2nd floor, but on the 5th floor.

* After the training session, a drink will be held at the reception. At first it was said that there was no drink, but this is going on anyway.

Would you like to pass this information on to the participants of the course.

If you have any questions please email me.

Sincerely,

Tim Sieban,

Head of Human Resources Kotoshina Company