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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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could you help me rewrite this for an assignment?

There’s a demand for professional services and the small business that have cash on hand have shown the most growth because they do not need to finance to expand.
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Anonymous could you help me rewrite this for an assignment? There’s a demand for professional services and the small business that have cash on hand have shown the most growth because they do not need to finance to expand. thanks Too long, the first 'and' is yelling for a stop.

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  • Anonymous could you help me rewrite this for an assignment?
  • There’s a demand for professional services and the small business that have cash on hand have shown the most growth because they do not need to finance to expand.
  • thanks Too long, the first 'and' is yelling for a stop.
  • Again, my 2 cents: The demand for professional services is rising.
  • The mid-size firms with a steady cash-flow have shown the highest growth (rate) because their expansion does not require funding.
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Anonymouscould you help me rewrite this for an assignment?

There’s a demand for professional services and the small business that have cash on hand have shown the most growth because they do not need to finance to expand.
thanks



Too long, the first 'and' is yelling for a stop.

Again, my 2 cents:

The demand for
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