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Ali234 Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Assess this excerpt, please

I would be glad if some generous person assess this excerpt:

Realism is one of the controversial debates in philosophy of science debates in which the main problem is the aim of science and limits and domains of scientific knowledge.

thanks in advance.

cheers,

Ali
  

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I am not sure as to what you want your writing to suggest in meaning. Realism is one of the controversial (debates) issues in philosophy of science (debates) (in) where the main problem is the aim of science and limits and domains of scientific knowledge. This sentence, I think, is correct grammatically, however, I am not sure it bridges the gap between your thoughts and what the receiver gets.

  • I am not sure as to what you want your writing to suggest in meaning.
  • Realism is one of the controversial (debates) issues in philosophy of science (debates) (in) where the main problem is the aim of science and limits and domains of scientific knowledge.
  • This sentence, I think, is correct grammatically, however, I am not sure it bridges the gap between your thoughts and what the receiver gets.
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I am not sure as to what you want your writing to suggest in meaning.

Realism is one of the controversial (debates) issues in philosophy of science (debates) (in) where the main problem is the aim of science and limits and domains of scientific knowledge.
This sentence, I think, is correct grammatically, however, I am not sure it bridges the gap between your
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Thanks a lot for your concern
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now let me continue with this:

Realists take empirical science, both about observables and about unobservables, cognitive and truth like, and in contrary their anti-realists colleague limit the cognitive content of empirical science to observables domain.

thanks in advance.

Ali
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Hi,

Realists take empirical science, both about observables and about unobservables, cognitive and truth like, and in contrary their anti-realists colleague limit the cognitive content of empirical science to observables domain.

This sentence needs some revision, as it is not clear. I've suggested some changes, but I may not have reflected your mean
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Thanks a lot. I rewrite last changes such:

Realism is one of the controversial issues in philosophy of science debates in which the main problem is about the aim of science and limits and domain of scientific knowledge. Realists believe that empirical sciences, both about observables and about unobservables, have cognitive content and are truth-like. On the contrary,

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