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Nake94nake94 Posted 15 years ago
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Hello

This is Negin from Iran

Would you please do me a favor?


I would like to get an offer from a university in Germany. for completing my application form I have to write some lines . woul you please correct them for me ?

I am in a hurry and it is so important for me .


You can find it as below :

There are a variety of reasons which I would like to point out; the first one that is so important for me is its uniqueness! Combining two major universities- Linguistics &Web Technology- makes a special feature MA program which persuades me to choose it bravely to studya theoretical and practical simultaneously. By searching on the internet it can be easily seen that Philips Marburg University is the first and only university that offers this great major in the world, so choosing it as my favorite seems so logical.

Also its great faculty and perfect facilities to do researches that its deficient in the Iranian educational system is seen easily encourage me to make it as one of my dreams. Marburg is not a city with a university located in, It is itself a university and I love its friendliness , Intimacy and …!!!



I would like to thank you in advanced.


Looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Best regards,

Negin

  

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Hello! nake94nake94 There are a variety of reasons which I would like to point out; the first one that is so important for me is its uniqueness! Combining two major universities- Linguistics &Web Technology- makes a special feature MA program which persuades me to choose it bravely to studya theoretical and practical simultaneously.

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  • Hello!
  • nake94nake94 There are a variety of reasons which I would like to point out; the first one that is so important for me is its uniqueness!
  • Combining two major universities- Linguistics &Web Technology- makes a special feature MA program which persuades me to choose it bravely to studya theoretical and practical simultaneously.
  • By searching on the internet it can be easily seen that Philips Marburg University is the first and only university that offers this great major in the world, so choosing it as my favorite seems so logical.
  • Also its great faculty and perfect facilities to do researches that its deficient in the Iranian educational system is seen easily encourage me to make it as one of my dreams.
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nake94nake94There are a variety of reasons which I would like to point out; the first one that is so important for me is its uniqueness! Combining two major universities- Linguistics &Web Technology- makes a special feature MA program which persuades me to choose it bravely to studya theoretical and practical simultaneously. By searching on the internet it can be ea
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