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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Asking for your favor: a proof reading

Hello, everyone,
I am a researcher who is writing the acknowledgement before submitting my paper. I am not a native speakers of English and it will be very helpful if you could provide me with your native speaker's insight. Would anyone of you proof read the following draft of my paper's acknowledgment? I don't like it sounding a little repetitious in expressing gratitudes. Thank you very much for your kind attention and advice in advance. TA

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This report is a product of the two-year ***-*** research project funded by ***. We would first like to thank *** of *** University for his general advice and invaluable guidance during the research. We also wish to thank three *** members, ***, ***, and *** for various advices and supports in many stages of the research. We are also indebted to *** members nationwide and businesspersons from various companies for their support in reviewing the earlier versions of questionnaire and offering their networks for locating businesspersons who answered the questionnaire. Finally, let us express our sincere gratitude to two anonymous referees of *** for their valuable comments and suggestions. None of the above, however, is responsible for any remaining errors in this paper.
  

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This report is a product of a two-year ***-*** research project funded by ***. We would first like to thank *** of *** University for his general advice and invaluable guidance during our research. We also wish to thank three *** members, ***, ***, and *** for their advice and support in many stages of this project .

  • This report is a product of a two-year ***-*** research project funded by ***.
  • We would first like to thank *** of *** University for his general advice and invaluable guidance during our research.
  • We also wish to thank three *** members, ***, ***, and *** for their advice and support in many stages of this project .
  • We are also indebted to *** members nationwide and businesspersons from several companies for their support in reviewing the earlier versions of the questionnaire and offering their networks for locating businessperson respondents.
  • Finally, we would like to express our sincere gratitude to two anonymous referees of *** for their valuable comments and suggestions.
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This report is a product of a two-year ***-*** research project funded by ***. We would first like to thank *** of *** University for his general advice and invaluable guidance during our research. We also wish to thank three *** members, ***, ***, and *** for their advice and support in many stages of this project. We are also indebted to *** members nationwi
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Dear Mister Micawber,
Thank you very much for proof reading!
I sometimes use this website to ask questions on English and have always been given informative answers. I think it has always been you, Mister Micawber, who give me those answers. Thank you again.
Sincerely,
TA

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