asking for information letter

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Could you please correct the following letter?
Dear Sir/Madam

I am interested in (…..............) course. I would appreciate if you could inform me if I meet the requirements necessary to study. Below are the details of my background.

I passed (the name of the exam) exam in June 20...
I hold a masters degree in (faculty). I graduated in 20....
In 20.... I did (…...) course in Ireland.
I would also to know if there is an age limit for the candidates.
I have been studying English as a foreign language for many years and recently become interested in translations.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully

Shi Aina · Accepted Answer

I made some corrections in italics which I hope are of some help otherwise it is written very well!

Dear Sir/Madam

I am interested in (…..............) course.--maybe it would be better if you wrote ''I am interested in studying .....course.''
I would appreciate if you could inform me if I meet the requirements necessary to study. Below are the details of my background.

I passed (the name of the exam) exam in June 20...
I hold a masters degree in (faculty). I graduated in 20....
In 20.... I did (…...) course in Ireland. --should put ''a'' after did so it reads ''I did a .....course
I would also to know if there is an age limit for the candidates. --needs a like after the 'also so it reads I would also like to know
I have been studying English as a foreign language for many years and recently become interested in translations.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully

Julius_ · Answer

Thank you Shi Aina.

Shi Aina · Answer

Hey, no problem. I love to be able to help someone. Have a great day!

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