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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Asking for help!

Could anybody correct this short essay for me?

I write the essay below to improve my English and motivate myself.

great thanks in advance

Harvardians may sleep only 3.5 hours a day, but they can still confront their lessons and life energetically. Besides that, their lessons also require higher concentration than mine.

Comparing with them, My situation becomes a piece of cake. My timetable are very much free them theirs. At least I can sleep 6 hours a day.

They can do so, why can’t I tackle my situation.
  

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5 hours a day but they can still confront their lessons and life energetically. Their lessons also require higher concentration than mine. Compar ed with them, m y situation is a piece of cake.

— Anonymous

  • 5 hours a day but they can still confront their lessons and life energetically.
  • Their lessons also require higher concentration than mine.
  • Compar ed with them, m y situation is a piece of cake.
  • I can sleep at least 6 hours a day and have much more free time than Harvardians.
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Harvardians may sleep only 3.5 hours a day but they can still confront their lessons and life energetically. Their lessons also require higher concentration than mine. Compared with them, my situation is a piece of cake. I can sleep at least 6 hours a day and have much more free time than Harvardians.
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Harvardians may sleep only 3.5 hours a day, but they can still confront their lessons and life energetically. Besides that, their lessons also require higher concentration than mine.

Compared to them, my situation is piece of cake. My timetable is very much freer them than theirs, at least I can sleep 6 hours a day.

If they can do so, why can’t I tackle
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