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Ilma Posted 15 years ago
I think for them who have been living in the worlds for a long time, the blasts are not shocked anymore, as it more often happened lately. but for them who have just born, or for them who still need our hand to help them in learning to walk, what will we say to them? Can we imagine, if we have a son, he watch a blast news in television and then he ask us " what is blast?" it is a simple question, but the asnwer isn't as simple as the question, it's complicated, very complicated.
Last but not least, i want to say that the impact of everything we do today will be felt by our offspring. if we teach peacefullness to them, they will give it to their children. I think we know what happen if what we do is the opposite. So, we have to create peacefulnes, no matter how small it is, at least around us.
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Asking for correction, and want to share an opinion as well
Where is peacefulness going?
Last time i was shocked by a blast in russia, and today i read there was another blast in afghanistan. what's wrong with the worlds now? what happened? is it one of the sign of war world 3? or is it a code that the world isn't save anymore?Maybe we can ask this to ourselves. have we contributed a peacefulness to the world? or we just make it decreases?.I think for them who have been living in the worlds for a long time, the blasts are not shocked anymore, as it more often happened lately. but for them who have just born, or for them who still need our hand to help them in learning to walk, what will we say to them? Can we imagine, if we have a son, he watch a blast news in television and then he ask us " what is blast?" it is a simple question, but the asnwer isn't as simple as the question, it's complicated, very complicated.
Last but not least, i want to say that the impact of everything we do today will be felt by our offspring. if we teach peacefullness to them, they will give it to their children. I think we know what happen if what we do is the opposite. So, we have to create peacefulnes, no matter how small it is, at least around us.
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Note: Check your use of captial letters. g. Russia, and Afghanistan.
- Note: Check your use of captial letters.
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- Russia, and Afghanistan.
- Where is peacefulness going?
- Last time I was shocked by a blast in R ussia, and today I read that there was another blast in A fghanistan.
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Note: Check your use of captial letters. Use capitals at the beginning of sentences, for the personal pronouns "I", and for proper names, such as countries: e.g. Russia, and Afghanistan.
Where is peacefulness going?
Last time I was shocked by a blast in
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