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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Asking for advise from a professor! Check it for me please!
This professor is my brother's friend on facebook and only on facebook just to make that clear.
He taught at Harvard Medical School for two years; that is the school I want to go to. So, I want to send him an email and the point of the message is to give me advise of what should I do to get accepted there. That is what I wrote for him, any help would be appreciated.
Hello Dr. XY,
I hope you are doing well. I am XX. I am an undergraduate student at the University xyz. It is my dream to get accepted to Harvard Medical School. I read about you and that you taught at Harvard Medical school for two years; congratulation! I would be very grateful if you were able to take the time to advise me on anything that I should pay attention to or anything that I should do before applying to Harvard Medical School. Any advise would be appreciate.
Sincerely yours,
XX
He taught at Harvard Medical School for two years; that is the school I want to go to. So, I want to send him an email and the point of the message is to give me advise of what should I do to get accepted there. That is what I wrote for him, any help would be appreciated.
Hello Dr. XY,
I hope you are doing well. I am XX. I am an undergraduate student at the University xyz. It is my dream to get accepted to Harvard Medical School. I read about you and that you taught at Harvard Medical school for two years; congratulation! I would be very grateful if you were able to take the time to advise me on anything that I should pay attention to or anything that I should do before applying to Harvard Medical School. Any advise would be appreciate.
Sincerely yours,
XX
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Here are my suggested changes. Hello Dr. XY, I hope you are doing well.
- Here are my suggested changes.
- Hello Dr.
- XY, I hope you are doing well.
- I am XX.
- I am an undergraduate student at the University xyz.
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Here are my suggested changes.
Hello Dr. XY,
I hope you are doing well. I am XX. I am an undergraduate student at the University xyz. It is my dream to get accepted to Harvard Medical School. I read about you and that you taught at Harvard Medical school for two years; congratulations! I would be very grateful if you were a
Hello Dr. XY,
I hope you are doing well. I am XX. I am an undergraduate student at the University xyz. It is my dream to get accepted to Harvard Medical School. I read about you and that you taught at Harvard Medical school for two years; congratulations! I would be very grateful if you were a
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