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Joestalin Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Asking approval for a software request

does this sentence correct? if changes need please correct it.

"I have raised a software request for our project, kindly provide approval for further process."
  

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Hello, Joe - and welcome to English Forums. Quite an unpleasant screen name you have chosen. As for your sentence, it is rather stilted.

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello, Joe - and welcome to English Forums.
  • Quite an unpleasant screen name you have chosen.
  • As for your sentence, it is rather stilted.
  • I would use something like this: I've made a software request for our project.
  • Could you please approve it?
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Hello, Joe - and welcome to English Forums. Quite an unpleasant screen name you have chosen.

As for your sentence, it is rather stilted. I would use something like this:

I've made a software request for our project. Could you please approve it?
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hello Mister Micawber,

I understand now. Thanks for ur suggestion.

Regards,

Joe
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