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?The following is my interpreter's sentence?
Accompanied by to melt in the society at advanced age, kind consideration of the silver hair clan is more and more too in the society, among them contain the limitless business opportunity. All kinds of industry, so long as use the clever thought, direct against the demand of the silver hair clan, can open new guest's storey and new business opportunity. In recent years, no matter health food, look after the industry, manage money matters on markets of silver hair such as the special project of investment, medical apparatus,etc. from medical treatment, cosmetic medical treatment and anti-ageing skin care products, suit travel, silver hair clan far, taken as the forest of the hot industry, the different number while becoming economy depressedly the Jin Dynasty.
?The following is my interpreter's sentence?
Accompanied by to melt in the society at advanced age, kind consideration of the silver hair clan is more and more too in the society, among them contain the limitless business opportunity. All kinds of industry, so long as use the clever thought, direct against the demand of the silver hair clan, can open new guest's storey and new business opportunity. In recent years, no matter health food, look after the industry, manage money matters on markets of silver hair such as the special project of investment, medical apparatus,etc. from medical treatment, cosmetic medical treatment and anti-ageing skin care products, suit travel, silver hair clan far, taken as the forest of the hot industry, the different number while becoming economy depressedly the Jin Dynasty.
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It's a mess. It sounds like it's been translated by Babblefish. Start by changing 'the silver hair clan' to 'our senior citizens'.
- It's a mess.
- It sounds like it's been translated by Babblefish.
- Start by changing 'the silver hair clan' to 'our senior citizens'.
- (Sorry, I've had to delete the original Chinese.
- )
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It's a mess. It sounds like it's been translated by Babblefish. Start by changing 'the silver hair clan' to 'our senior citizens'.
(Sorry, I've had to delete the original Chinese. Only English is permitted in posts here.)
(Sorry, I've had to delete the original Chinese. Only English is permitted in posts here.)
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