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Chin jia Chung Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Ask for help to correct sentence~

ha, pal,

Could you please help to check my sentence.
Thank you.

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1.I saw many beautiful scenes from the airplane cruises.
2. The noise and shaking from the engines are so charming.
3. I would like to be a pilot, but not just a passenger.
  

Top answer

I saw a lot of beautiful scenery from the airplane. 2. The noise and shaking of the engines is very exciting.

— Mister Micawber

  • I saw a lot of beautiful scenery from the airplane.
  • 2.
  • The noise and shaking of the engines is very exciting.
  • 3.
  • I would like to be a pilo t, not just a passenger.
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1.I saw a lot of beautiful scenery from the airplane.
2. The noise and shaking of the engines is very exciting.
3. I would like to be a pilot, not just a passenger.
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Not 'Noise and shaking are'? 'Noise' and 'shaking' can be considered a singular entity here? I agree that 'is' sounds better, though.
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Thank you. Both of you.Sir.
It's helpful to me.

Have a nice day!
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chin jia ChungHave a nice day!
And welcome to English Forums, chin jia Chung.
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