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Too finicky 7 Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Ascend

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I love the way the story ascends from a state of despair to hope.

  

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Your sentence is grammatically correct. I would substitute the simpler 'moves' for 'ascends', and I would remove 'a state of'. I love the way the story moves from despair to hope.

— CalifJim

  • Your sentence is grammatically correct.
  • I would substitute the simpler 'moves' for 'ascends', and I would remove 'a state of'.
  • I love the way the story moves from despair to hope.
  • CJ
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Your sentence is grammatically correct.

I would substitute the simpler 'moves' for 'ascends', and I would remove 'a state of'.

I love the way the story moves from despair to hope.

CJ

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