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The main characteristics of Vipassana meditation are:
  • The Vipassana meditation technique is known globally. Whatever caste, creed or country you belong to does not matter to do this.
  • It gets to the base of an individual's destructive and dirty emotions in the unconscious mind and minimizes the distance between both layers of the mind: unconscious and conscious.
  • The use of imagination is not necessary in this technique of meditation, you just have to walk on the path yourself.
  • As you work for becoming a better person, the more you are going to gain the benefits from this.


Is the last sentence correct because it sounds strange to me?
  

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Hi, As you work for becoming a better person, the more you are going to gain the benefits from this. Is the last sentence correct because it sounds strange to me? No, it's not correct, I have marked some problem areas above.

— Clive

  • Hi, As you work for becoming a better person, the more you are going to gain the benefits from this.
  • Is the last sentence correct because it sounds strange to me?
  • No, it's not correct, I have marked some problem areas above.
  • Better versions are eg As you work to become a better person, you are going to gain more benefits from this.
  • The more you work to become a better person, the more benefits you are going to gain.
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Hi,
  • As you work for becoming a better person, the more you are going to gain the benefits from this.


Is the last sentence correct because it sounds strange to me?

No, it's
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