Do the following sentences carry the same meaning?
1. By assuring accommodation, we can prevent the slums from sprawling. As, those who are living under the poverty line will no longer need to stay in unauthorized spaces.
2. By assuring accommodation, we can prevent the slums from sprawling so that those who are living under the poverty line will no longer need to stay in unauthorized spaces.
Neither version is correct. The first includes a sentence fragment. The second says that the poor will not need to live in unauthorized spaces as a consequence of our preventing the slums from sprawling.
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Neither version is correct. The first includes a sentence fragment. The second says that the poor will not need to live in unauthorized spaces as a consequence of our preventing the slums from sprawling. What it should say is that it is a consequence of our assuring accommodation. Try "By assuring accommodation, we can prevent the slums from sprawling, as those who are living under the poverty