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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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After his performing of what was most certainly an athletic triathlon, he recomposes himself, bobbing back and forth as having the buoyance and appearance of a rusting fishing tub.

After his performing of what was most certainly an athletic triathlon, he recomposes himself, bobbing back and forth as to have the buoyance and appearance of a rusting fishing tub.

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Anonymous which one? Neither. After finishing a very athletic triathlon, he recomposes himself, bobbing back and forth like a rusty fishing tub.

  • Anonymous which one?
  • Neither.
  • After finishing a very athletic triathlon, he recomposes himself, bobbing back and forth like a rusty fishing tub.
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Anonymouswhich one?
Neither.

After finishing a very athletic triathlon, he recomposes himself, bobbing back and forth like a rusty fishing tub.
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. . . , bobbing back and forth like a rusty fishing tub

I don't find this a very useful simile. It doesn't give me a good mental picture of what he was doing.

Clive.

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