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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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As the day progresses


Which is correct please?

The weather get nicer and the temperature rises as the day progresses.
the more the day progresses, the nicer the weather gets.

thanks

  

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You forgot an "s" in the first one and a capital letter in the second one. The first is better because there is something odd about "the more the day progresses". Things do not progress more.

— Anonymous

  • You forgot an "s" in the first one and a capital letter in the second one.
  • The first is better because there is something odd about "the more the day progresses".
  • Things do not progress more.
  • They might progress further.
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You forgot an "s" in the first one and a capital letter in the second one.

The first is better because there is something odd about "the more the day progresses". Things do not progress more. They might progress further.

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anonymous


Which is correct please?

The weather get nicer and the temperature rises as the day progresses.
the more the day progresses, the nicer the weather gets.

thanks

The natural way to say it is " The weather got warmer and nicer as the day went on."

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