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Navitasan Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

As some bands to

Is this sentence correct:

1-The additional musicians can be seen by the audience and are not hidden behind screens as some bands do.
Meaning: Some bands hide the additional musicians behind screens, but this band did not do that.

It doesn't sound right to me. It seems to lack parallelism.

Gratefully,
Navi.
  

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The additional musicians can be seen by the audience and are not hidden behind screens as in some bands do .

  • The additional musicians can be seen by the audience and are not hidden behind screens as in some bands do .
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The additional musicians can be seen by the audience and are not hidden behind screens as in some bands do. Emotion: wink

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