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Mr. Tom Posted 16 years ago
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As she lay in bed, dead, Gone with the Wind ...
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Could you please tell me if you find this sentence natural, especially the yellow part? If no, please edit it.
As she lay in bed, dead, Gone with the Wind was sprawled on her chest, with only 40 pages to go.
Thanks,
Tom
Could you please tell me if you find this sentence natural, especially the yellow part? If no, please edit it.
As she lay in bed, dead, Gone with the Wind was sprawled on her chest, with only 40 pages to go.
Thanks,
Tom
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Why on earth the double spacing is not working in any of my posts today? Tom
- Why on earth the double spacing is not working in any of my posts today?
- Tom
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Why on earth the double spacing is not working in any of my posts today?
Tom
Tom
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Hi,
Could you please tell me if you find this sentence natural, especially the yellow part? If no, please edit it.
As she lay in bed, dead, Gone with the Wind was sprawled on her chest, with only 40 pages to go.
It's OK.
Clive
Could you please tell me if you find this sentence natural, especially the yellow part? If no, please edit it.
As she lay in bed, dead, Gone with the Wind was sprawled on her chest, with only 40 pages to go.
It's OK.
Clive
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