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Zazzex Posted 17 years ago
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As my sister being a designer ?


Hello,

Are these correct?

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"During my school years, as my father ran a business, my second sister being a designer, and my third sister being a science teacher in a public school, I was able to develop creativity."



"During my school years, StartFragment>as my father ran a business; my second sister was a designer; and my third sister was a science teacher in a public school, I was able to develop creativity."





"During my school years, as my father ran a business, my second sister was a designer, and my third sister was a science teacher in a public school, I was able to develop creativity."



Thanks a lot
  

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Hi,

During my school years, as my father ran a business, my second sister being a designer, and my third sister being a science teacher in a public school, I was able to develop creativity."

During my school years, my father running a business, my second sister being a designer, and my third sister being a science teacher in a public school, I was able to develop creat

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