The first sentence seems like a kind of stream of consciousness to me. This technique is employed by some writers. I get this impression because from a strictly grammatical viewpoint, the sentence is ungrammatical in that there is a comma between the verb (thought) and its object (what if he were caught by police).
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Cool BreezeThis technique is employed by some writers.
FandorinSummarize, all those (what if, as if, and such phrases) don't define clauses as conditional, do they? Thank you, Cool Breeze.I never thought of it that way. I guess not since such a variety of verb forms are actually used with them. I'm more interested in what is said and written than what it is called.
FandorinShe thought, what if he were caught by police, stealing the tree?This is the subjunctive (were), not a future of the past, and it's more like narrative writing than expository writing.
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