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Newguest Posted 11 years ago
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All other creatures (besides people) on the planet get their sugars only from natural foods they eat. Refined sugar just doesn't exist in the wild. And coincidentally, neither does eating as a response to emotion, diabetes, overweight, or mental addiction.
Does it say "as a response to diabetes" and "as a response to overweight"?
All other creatures (besides people) on the planet get their sugars only from natural foods they eat. Refined sugar just doesn't exist in the wild. And coincidentally, neither does eating as a response to emotion, diabetes, overweight, or mental addiction.
Does it say "as a response to diabetes" and "as a response to overweight"?
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It would be clearer as: And coincidentally, neither does diabetes, overweight, mental addiction or eating as a response to emotion
- It would be clearer as: And coincidentally, neither does diabetes, overweight, mental addiction or eating as a response to emotion
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It would be clearer as: And coincidentally, neither does diabetes, overweight, mental addiction or eating as a response to emotion
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Overweight is used incorrectly here, overweight is an adjective, or word used to describe something. The right word to use would be obesity, as it is a noun. Also, "neither does eating as a response to emotion" "diabetes" "overweight" and "mental addiction" are all separate things. so it does not say "as a response to overweight"
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NewguestDoes it say "as a response to diabetes" and "as a response to overweight"?No. Here's what it says: There are five things that don't exist in the wild:
refined sugar,
eating as a response to emotion,
diabetes,
overweight [should be 'obesity' or 'being overweight'],
mental addiction [incoherent idea in my opinion]
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