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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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What evil had taken them as they forayed our hotel with no reason.

Is this setence correct?

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] our hotel with no reason?! I'm not sure if evil takes you, or overtakes you, or if evil takes over your soul... none of these sound quite natural.

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  • ] our hotel with no reason?!
  • I'm not sure if evil takes you, or overtakes you, or if evil takes over your soul...
  • none of these sound quite natural.
  • "
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What evil had overtaken them as they [what??] our hotel with no reason?!

I'm not sure if evil takes you, or overtakes you, or if evil takes over your soul... none of these sound quite natural.

I'm not sure what you meant by "forayed."
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Thank you Grammar Geek,

I mean the word foray is attack. When I looked at the dictionary, the word foray is noun only. I misused it as verb.

I mean the evil overtook them so they attacked the hotel without reason.

Once agan, thank you
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