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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Artificial lighting/ artificial light sources

Hi,

Is "artificial lighting" fine in the sentence below? what about replacing it with "artificial light sources"?

"The increasing use of artificial lighting and its effect on biological and physiological processes in the body has led us to study the effect of light intensity on oxidative stress in male rats in this study."

Is there any other corrections needed?


Thanks!

  

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gillyflower Is "artificial lighting" fine in the sentence below? Yes. gillyflower what about replacing it with "artificial light sources"?

— Mister Micawber

  • gillyflower Is "artificial lighting" fine in the sentence below?
  • Yes.
  • gillyflower what about replacing it with "artificial light sources"?
  • No; it is distracting.
  • gillyflower Is there any other corrections needed?
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gillyflowerIs "artificial lighting" fine in the sentence below?

Yes.

gillyflowerwhat about replacing it with "artificial light sources"?

No; it is distracting.

gillyflowerIs there any other corrections needed?

Just delete 'in this study'; it is redundant.

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