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Antonija Posted 17 years ago
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The following set, combined from various kits, was used for this study only: a scalpel, a guide wire (60cm), curved cone shaped dilatator (a CCS dilatator) (a part of Cook® mini tracheotomy kit: Blue Rhino; Cook® Medical INC. Bloomington, IN 47402-4195 U.S.A.), a small dilatator, a Tuchy needle16 G with 10 ml syringe from an epidural catheter set (B. Braun Medical Inc. 824 Twelfth Avenue Bethlehem, PA 18018), a chest tube, a laryngoscope, an orotracheal tube and a self-inflating bag. On each cadaver orotracheal intubation and self-inflating bag ventilation 12 times per minute were performed. The site of the chest tube insertion was in the 4th intercostal space between the mid and anterior axillary line.
The following set, combined from various kits, was used for this study only: a scalpel, a guide wire (60cm), curved cone shaped dilatator (a CCS dilatator) (a part of Cook® mini tracheotomy kit: Blue Rhino; Cook® Medical INC. Bloomington, IN 47402-4195 U.S.A.), a small dilatator, a Tuchy needle16 G with 10 ml syringe from an epidural catheter set (B. Braun Medical Inc. 824 Twelfth Avenue Bethlehem, PA 18018), a chest tube, a laryngoscope, an orotracheal tube and a self-inflating bag. On each cadaver orotracheal intubation and self-inflating bag ventilation 12 times per minute were performed. The site of the chest tube insertion was in the 4th intercostal space between the mid and anterior axillary line.
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The following set, combined from various kits, was used for this study only: a scalpel, a guide wire ( 60 cm ), a curved cone-shaped dilatator ( a CCS dilatator, a part [adjacent bracketed clauses are not ideal; I'm assuming you mean that just the dilatator was part of the Cook kit] of the Cook® mini tracheotomy kit: Blue Rhino; Cook® Medical Inc . , Bloomington, IN 47402-4195 , USA ), a small dilatator, a Tuchy needle16 G [is this written correctly? Google search throws up things like "Tu o hy needle, 16 G"] with 10 ml syringe from an epidural catheter set (B.
- The following set, combined from various kits, was used for this study only: a scalpel, a guide wire ( 60 cm ), a curved cone-shaped dilatator ( a CCS dilatator, a part [adjacent bracketed clauses are not ideal; I'm assuming you mean that just the dilatator was part of the Cook kit] of the Cook® mini tracheotomy kit: Blue Rhino; Cook® Medical Inc .
- , Bloomington, IN 47402-4195 , USA ), a small dilatator, a Tuchy needle16 G [is this written correctly?
- Google search throws up things like "Tu o hy needle, 16 G"] with 10 ml syringe from an epidural catheter set (B.
- Braun Medical Inc.
- , 824 Twelfth Avenue , Bethlehem, PA 18018 , USA [for consistency]), a chest tube, a laryngoscope, an orotracheal tube and a self-inflating bag.
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The following set, combined from various kits, was used for this study only: a scalpel, a guide wire (60 cm), a curved cone-shaped dilatator (a CCS dilatator, a part [adjacent bracketed clauses are not ideal; I'm assuming you mean that just the dilatator was part of the Cook kit] of the Cook® mini tracheotomy kit: Blue Rhino; Cook® Medical Inc.
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