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CS technique
Each cadaver was orotracheally intubated and ventilated with self-inflating bag 12 times per minute. The CS technique was performed following the standard ATLS procedure [3]. The insertion site was in the 5th intercostal space at the nipple level, just anterior to the midaxillary line. Two to three cm incision was made horizontally. The dissection of the subcutaneous tissue and muscle was done with scissors over the superior rim of the rib. Pleura was penetrated with a clamp and gloved finger was put in pleural space for protection of lung injury and examination of adhesions. The tube was inserted with the clamp in desired direction. Skin suture was used for the tube fixation.
CS technique
Each cadaver was orotracheally intubated and ventilated with self-inflating bag 12 times per minute. The CS technique was performed following the standard ATLS procedure [3]. The insertion site was in the 5th intercostal space at the nipple level, just anterior to the midaxillary line. Two to three cm incision was made horizontally. The dissection of the subcutaneous tissue and muscle was done with scissors over the superior rim of the rib. Pleura was penetrated with a clamp and gloved finger was put in pleural space for protection of lung injury and examination of adhesions. The tube was inserted with the clamp in desired direction. Skin suture was used for the tube fixation.
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Each cadaver was orotracheally intubated and ventilated with a ["the" is also possible but seems less likely; it would mean that you used the same bag for every cadaver, and that this was significant enough to note] self-inflating bag 12 times per minute. The CS technique was performed following the standard ATLS procedure [3]. The insertion site was in the 5th intercostal space at the nipple level, just anterior to the midaxillary line.
- Each cadaver was orotracheally intubated and ventilated with a ["the" is also possible but seems less likely; it would mean that you used the same bag for every cadaver, and that this was significant enough to note] self-inflating bag 12 times per minute.
- The CS technique was performed following the standard ATLS procedure [3].
- The insertion site was in the 5th intercostal space at the nipple level, just anterior to the midaxillary line.
- A two to three cm incision was made horizontally.
- The dissection of the subcutaneous tissue and muscle was done with scissors over the superior rim of the rib.
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Each cadaver was orotracheally intubated and ventilated with a ["the" is also possible but seems less likely; it would mean that you used the same bag for every cadaver, and that this was significant enough to note] self-inflating bag 12 times per minute. The CS technique was performed following the standard ATLS procedure [3]. The insertion site was in the 5th intercostal space at the nip
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"The tube was inserted with the clamp in the desired direction."
It may also be worth pointing out that this sentence is ambiguous. It's not clear if "in the desired direction" refers to the clamp or the tube.
It may also be worth pointing out that this sentence is ambiguous. It's not clear if "in the desired direction" refers to the clamp or the tube.
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Thank you Mr Wordy. I'll have to check with the author of the text what he really wanted to say.
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