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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Article title

Hi

I'm writing an article, and I'm having some problems with the title:

Current title: My 3 Favorite Musicians and Choreograpers (Who You Should Check Out Too)

Is that title grammatically okay?
  

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"). Spelling: Choreograp h ers In formal English "Who" should be "Whom", but "check out" is informal, so I think "Who" is probably more appropriate here.

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  • Spelling: Choreograp h ers In formal English "Who" should be "Whom", but "check out" is informal, so I think "Who" is probably more appropriate here.
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It's better style to write small numbers in words ("My Three Favorite ...").

Spelling: Choreographers

In formal English "Who" should be "Whom", but "check out" is informal, so I think "Who" is probably more appropriate here.
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Thanks!

So, the last part (Who You Should Check Out Too) of the title looks okay? Would it be better to use 'As Well' instead of who?
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AnonymousSo, the last part (Who You Should Check Out Too) of the title looks okay?
Yes, provided it's not meant to be formal writing.
AnonymousWould it be better to use 'As Well' instead of who?
I assume you meant to write "instead of 'too'", not "instead of who". "Too" is OK. There is no reason to change it to "As Well
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