art statement

hello
I established my artist website and wrote an statement about myself. I was wondering if anyone could correct it in case of having errors.

In the first day of my art program at high school the teacher taught us how to see. That was a great lesson. Then I started to see different, and as I went on I started to touch different, then for every aspect of my work and life there was a different way. This different way worked like a filter in front of my eyes. A filter I like to call aesthetics. By the knowledge of aesthetics I started to develop a unique style of my own. And this style, I believe is not in terms of an abstractive style or a realistic style, a gregarious subject or an introspective subject. So when I adopted different approaches towards painting in different periods of my life like the days I loved one girl, after months I spent in Iran’s jail, or the years I loved nature I still had my own style.
I find it hard to interpret this style into word language, but I can speak about my medium. Canvas is the base for almost every technique of mine, which is chosen in rather big sizes. Its sustainability and ostentation is compatible with my subjects. My subjects are painted in sharp colors that are outlined in clear perimeters. My paints also developed from acrylics to oil paints to have an overall lucid style. In my paintings I try to capture a transient concept and sustain it. Bearing in mind that it takes time and effort to be found, it’s too worthy to loose soon. So I clarify its voice to resist longer against the erosion of time.